>>I indentify these three lines as very poetic:
1. And now the state line felt like the Berlin wall
2. Cause I built you a home in my heart, With rotten wood, it decayed from the start
3. Made the skyline look like crooked teeth, In the mouth of a man who was devouring, us both.
>>I find these poetic because:
1. I think that the imagery is strong in this line and by comparing the distance he feels to the Berlin wall gets the message across that there is no way to cross over and the other side is a different world.
2. I think this line is very poetic because it gives a strong message of the failure of their relationship from the start. Even though it’s sad to think that they were doomed from the beginning, its very poetic in the song.
3. I admire this line because it personifies a sky line. He doesn’t just say that there were big buildings that overwhelmed him and his relationship, he says it in a creative way that the buildings were all teeth of a man and that man was taking them over.
